We were then put into groups to make up a paragraphs about how the sound and editing used in the extract we watched and how it represented gender. This helped us see other peoples writing skills and; and then add to our own ideas.
Next we evaluated the other groups paragraphs as sir put a photo of them on the projector the following criticisms came up:
Ensure that you open paragraphs with a clear point, referring back to the area of representation that you have been asked to write about
Avoid run on sentences - clear grammar and punctuation adds to the clarity of your analysis
Avoid description; ensure that there is evidence of technical analysis in every sentence
Use key terms frequently and accurately
Make sure you know the difference between 'dentotation' and 'connotation'
Try to make links between the different technical features. This demonstrates a deeper level of understanding.
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