Rough Cut

This is our rough cut we have decided that we need to re-shoot some scenes because the framing at the beginning in the internal location of Scotts cousins house, which we have decided to call the male protagonists house. This means that the top of the male protagonists head has been cut off so the rule of thirds has not been put in place because the focus should be the centre of the male protagonists face in one of the close ups at  . However, its slightly out of place so conveys an unprofessional piece of media. we also need to edit the end so it is as though time is passing as the doors open because it looks too much like a rough cut from when the male protagonist is looking at the CCTV cameras.

Theses are more changes we need to make to the rough cut to produce our final cut from Louise Wilmhurst's (Loua's) blog. I agree with all the changes that need to be made.

We also need to create a title for our opening sequence because although we have decided its an action thriller it needs a name.